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Monday, January 1, 2007

The Battle

Author's Note: My challenge was to write a story that was abstract and vague. I have a great idea for a detailed story (of which I'm still "researching" and trying to outline the plot), but didn't know if I would be able to make it either of those two qualities. Then one of the other Inkwells members suggested that I outline the detailed story and use the outline as the response to this challenge. It turned out that outlining this story in narrative form makes it the shortest story I've ever written (not to mention, shorter than the paragraph I've just written to introduce it), at only 39 words:

The Mistress of the Island Plain and the Lady of the Mount, each on orders from the same monarch's duly authorized lieutenants, took the field in a fiery witches' contest. The assassins cast many spells, both offensive and defensive, and eventually one witch found herself unable to continue the battle.

Author's Note: The version above is actually 50 words long, since one of the Inkwells members mentioned that there was a who, where, and how, but no why. So, it took me 11 words to add the why.

Also, I figured it out!

I looked up the dictionary and thesaurus entries (on thesaurus.reference.com) for abstract and vague. Vague is "not definite or clear," and abstract is "conceptual, theoretical." Neither one is listed in the other's synonyms, but they are both listed as synonyms for abstruse, which means "difficult to understand."

So, my story is definitely vague. It's not abstruse, but I'm pretty sure it can be considered abstract, since it's not just a very short, vague story, but it's also the concept of a longer, more detailed and clear story.

No Fury . . .

Author Notes: This was a difficult prompt for me. I've never been very good at building suspense and/or literary tension. I gave it a try though. Hope you like.

"So, Randy, who you here with?" Mel asked while watching himself tug a comb through his curly blond hair in the mirror.

Jessica," the tuxedo-clad Randy answered with a mirrored smirk, "and Lynnette."

"Dude, how'd you pull that off?" Mel's reflected blue eyes widened as his jaw slackened.

"Went to pick up Jess first." Randy's voice echoed around the aquamarine tile of the boys' bathroom as he threw away the paper towel he'd just dried his hands with, "and was supposed to meet Lynn here, so about half-an-hour in, I told Jess I had to talk to Coach Penn for a minute, and went to meet her. I've got it all planned, you see: half-an-hour with Jess, Half-an-hour with Lynn, and then back to Jess for half-an-hour, and so on. Piece of cake!"

"You mean, they don't know you're here with both of them?" Mel gasped.

"Nope."

"Woah."

Both teens started to make their way back to the school gym. The SGA had decorated with streamers, cloth-covered tables, and banners proclaiming the prom for the class of '01. They did not get past the first bank of lockers though, before Mel almost ran his nose into Randy's wide quarterback shoulders.

"Hey, man, what's the hold up?" Mel asked.

Randy didn't answer, and Mel came around to the side, noting the pallor of his friend's normally-tanned face. Wondering what could have spooked his friend so much, Mel followed the hazel-eyed gaze.

About ten feet up the hall, two girls, a brunette and a redhead, both in their best evening wear, blocked the doorway across the hall into the school gym, their arms crossed. Jessica's right toe tapped under pink taffeta, and Lynnette's plucked red eyebrow was raised in disdain.

"Uh, hi, girls." Randy had finally found his voice. "I can explain?"

Author Notes: The Inkwells group mentioned that they needed more "stupid little details" to help them care about the characters. More non-dialogue and description. However, the story was from the boys' point-of-view, but the girls had overheard their conversation, and therefore decided to wait outside to chew Randy out. I added in as much passing details as I could before posting the story here, but more scene description in a scene where the characters wouldn't notice that much anyway, since they've already seen the room a million times since starting high school--they're not likely to look around all that much by this point in their schooling.

. . . Like a Woman Two-Timed

Author's Note: Despite suspecting that the next prompt would be to conclude the cliffhanger, I had no idea how to end the story. So, I fudged it. It's kind of a lame ending (it was also a lame cliffhanger, so I guess it works), but here it is anyway. I'd love better ideas on how to make Randy squirm--suggestions would be greatly appreciated!

Also, since I think the whole story is lame anyway, I'm not going to revise this half of it. There were some great comments given to me by the Inkwells group, but this is one of those stories that just leaves me with a feeling of "Meh."

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"Uh, hi, girls." Randy had finally found his voice. "I can explain?"

The brunette in front of him narrowed her eyes, then turned to Mel. "Leave." The tone of command in Jessica's voice came from nearly two years as team captain, dealing with the antics of the girls' varsity cross-country team, and Mel was powerless to disobey.

Like a deer just released from the spell of oncoming headlights, the school's tight end darted around Lynnette's side, and through the double-doors to the decorated gymnasium, without so much as a parting glance to his doomed teammate.

Lynnette followed Mel's retreat with a smirk in her green eyes, which disappeared the moment her attention was brought back to her boyfriend. She could not blame Jessica for accepting a date with Randy, since no one had known that he had been seeing Lynnette for the past three weeks.

She'd spoken to Jessica on the dance floor, when they both learned that they'd been asked to the dance by Randy, and found out that he had asked Jess to the prom just three days before. When Jess had recounted the exact words of Randy's invitation to be his date, she and Lynn had gone to find the boy, and had overheard the conversation in the bathroom.

Randy stood rooted to the spot, dreading the impending confrontation. He'd had it all planned out, how he'd sneak away from each girl to attend to the other over the course of the evening, and then take his girl Lynnette to the Marriott after driving Jessica home.

But he'd forgotten one very important detail: in order for his plan to work, neither girl could speak to the other. Keeping the girls away from each other, even on a normal day, would have been impossible, since they were not only best friends, but cousins as close as sisters. He had already been extremely lucky, he reflected in hindsight, that neither girl had mentioned him to the other in the weeks preceding the prom, or else he would have had no date at all.

This last thought in mind, Randy regained some of his color, and with it, a bit of his bravado. "All right," he wheedled, "I screwed up, okay, I get it. But tell me you weren't having fun tonight, ladies!" He spread his arms wide, a shit-eating grin on his dark face.

Both girls scoffed aloud. "Randy Velay, if you think you're gonna talk your way out of this, you've got another think coming." Lynnette rolled her eyes and fixed her chess strategy stare on her decidedly ex-boyfriend.

"Aw, c'mon, Lynn. Y'know you love me." Randy's eyes shifted back and forth, searching for an exit to this confrontation.

"Pfft," Jessica put in her two cents. "Please. She may be vice-president of the Chess Club, but there are most definitely other--and better--fish in the sea. She doesn't need the school quarterback to make her look good."

Lynnette was not the typical chess enthusiast. She could have been a cheerleader, but found the other girls on the squad too shallow for her taste. Instead, she had joined the Chess Club, where her mental talents were appreciated just as much as her physical attributes.

"Thanks, Jess."

"No problem, cuz."

The girls nodded to each other, and then faced Randy again.

"Here's how it's gonna be," Jessica proclaimed. "We're all going to go back to the gym, where you will get up on stage and borrow the DJ's mic. Then, you will announce to everyone present that you're swearing off dating for the duration of your upcoming freshman year in college, because you want more time to study and keep your grades up for that fancy football scholarship you got.

"After that, you will stay away from both of us for the rest of the night, and Lynn will ride home with me after the dance. For the rest of the school year, you will not say anything to either of us that is not related to school, and we will not talk to you unless we have to. Are we clear?"

"And if I don't?"

"Between the two of us," Lynnette answered, "we pretty much have the whole school covered with connections of one sort or another. Should you fail to follow the terms we have laid out, it would be extremely easy to spread a rumor that you're gay to the entire student body. You wouldn't want that, now would you?"

"N-no," Randy gulped. Either make a public and extremely personal, not to mention false, announcement that he was going to be celibate for his first year of college, or he'd be humiliated. Either way, his pride would take a blow, but he really didn't want to have to explain to every girl he met that he wasn't gay.

"No need for that," he said. "Let's just go back to the gym, huh? Looks like I've got an announcement to make."

A Family Card Game

“Out!” The shout came from my left as Anna sat back in triumph and relaxed a second before gathering up the sixteen stacks of playing cards in the middle of the table.

"Aw, man," my brother grumbled. "I only had one left."

"Oh, hush," I retorted, rolling my eyes at Jason's petulance. "At least you weren't stuck with a king as your second card." For my trouble, Jason showed me his tongue, turned blue from the Kool-Aid he’d drunk with the pizza Dad had made for dinner that night.

"That's enough, you two," Dad said as he counted the five cards remaining from his original stack of thirteen. Already knowing that I was stuck with twelve, I gathered up the other cards from my deck and picked up the pencil sitting on the pad next to me, ready to record and add up everyone's scores.

It had been months since any of us had played Thirteen, but after five rounds, we were all starting to get the hang of it again. The object was to get as many of your cards to the center of the table as possible, building from Ace to King on any stack, provided the cards you were using were the right number and suit. With multiple stacks of each suit possible at any given time, and other players trying to get their own cards out at the same time, Thirteen was more a game of speed than of skill or strategy. So Dad, at a disadvantage to our youthful speed, was usually the straggler in the family card game, since per-round scores could be anywhere from negative twenty-six to positive fifty-two. But even Dad had managed to get into the positive points range two rounds before.

With a yawn, I waited for Anna to finish sorting the cards into their separate decks, uncrossing and recrossing my legs while I tapped the pencil's eraser on the paper. The last five rounds had taken an hour, and it was already nine o’clock. I wanted to go home and get some pajamas on, maybe listen to my iPod or something before I had to go to sleep.

Finally, Anna had sorted the last few cards--two into Jason’s red angel-designed deck, and a third into the Harley Davidson deck Dad had used this hand, the four of us counted our points. I finished counting first, and recorded my score, staring at Dad and Jason's hands as they finished counting.

"All right, Whatcha got?"

"Forty," came from Anna's corner.

"Twenty-eight," Dad said.

"Five," Jason sighed.

After a bit of math, I announced the winner--Anna.

"Yay!"

"Play again?" Dad asked.

"Nah, I wanna go home," I said, standing and stretching my arms over my head as another yawn surprised me. "How ‘bout you, Anna?"

"Sounds good," she said. “I need to do some laundry before I go to work tomorrow anyway.”

Cards back in their boxes, the four of us folded up our chairs and the card table, putting them away before hugging each other good-bye until next time.

In the Background of a Joyful Noise

Author's Notes: For some reason, when I saw this prompt, I immediately thought of the song "Hava Nagila," even though I'm not Jewish, and thought up the following story. For those of you who are Jewish, please know that if I wrote anything that is not culturally correct, I do not intend to offend. I simply do not know enough about the culture to know when I need to look something up, except for obvious things like naming conventions and such.

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Seven-year-old Rina and her younger cousins played with the dreidel Rina had received for Hannukah in the corner, while her older sister Talya and the other adults celebrated Talya's wedding to their long-time neighbors' son, Levi.

The glass had been broken hours ago, and the feast was well and truly leftovers, the aromas long dissipated. Now, the wedding party and their adult guests danced with great enthusiasm as the band played "Hava Nagila." The chair handlers had become tired, so the bride and groom joined the other dancers on the floor.

The children were playing with grains of rice in the pot, and Rina's youngest cousin, chubby little Asher, had the largest pile in front of him. At barely three years old, Asher was old enough to keep from eating the raw grain, but not old enough to notice that the others were letting him win.

Just then, the music stopped, and Papa's voice came over the speakers. It was time to send off the bride and groom. The children gathered up their rice, stuffing most of it into the little sacks it came in (keeping out a handful to throw at the very first), while Rina pocketed her toy, and they all stood up to make their way to the center of the room.

Everyone gathered around Talya and Levi, then preceded them out the door of the wedding hall. Outside was a long, white limousine, and as Talya and Levi raced through the doors with smiles on their faces, Rina and the other children threw their rice while the adults cheered and waved, Asher, of course, throwing the most with a large grin on his face.

After Talya waved one last time from the back window of the limo, Rina's father came up behind her. "All right, little Rina," he said, stroking her curly brown hair and putting his hands on her shoulders with a kiss to her temple. "Time to get you home and go to bed."

"But Papa," she answered, "I'm not tired."

Despite her protest, Rina fell into a contented sleep before the car was even halfway home.

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Author's Notes: In case you worry that I forgot the happy part (which isn't really a question, considering that the story is about a wedding, but hey) Rina means "joy" in Hebrew.

Also, some Inkwells members mentioned my use of rice in the throwing, instead of bird seed or bubbles. I needed something for the children to have in the pot though, so bubbles wouldn't work, and bird seed is too varied in composition. I couldn't remember anything else at a wedding that was so numerous, so I used rice anyway.

Finally, there was also mention from the Inkwells group that they'd completely forgotten that it was a wedding until everyone went out to throw rice. That was deliberate on my part; my intention was to focus on the quiet happiness of the children, who are usually in the background at such large gatherings, and juxtaposing that with the loud and boistrous celebration going on (for this story, at least) in the background.

Case Closed

"Mama."

Caroline woke to a little boy's whisper. Probably Toby with a nightmare again. Groggily, she turned over, rubbing the bleariness out of her eyes. When she moved her hand, however, there was no one there.

She turned back toward Duane's side of their king-size bed, and started at the boy who greeted her again, eyes wide in that way all children's eyes become when sharing secrets. "Mama, I was lost. Why didn't you come find me?" her first son asked with pleading green eyes darkened in the midnight blackness of the room.

"I'm so sorry, baby," Caroline answered. "We tried so hard, but no one could find you."

Neil had been kidnapped when he was six years old. The authorities searched for weeks, but there was no trace of him. She and Duane had been devastated, and for years kept hoping that their boy would be found. An old family friend, Odom Detwiler, had been a godsend, organizing the search and liaising with the police and other searchers. But after nearly two years, Caroline and Duane decided to end the search in the hopes that Neil would eventually find his way back to them on his own.

After a few more years, in which both of them came to accept the loss of Neil, Toby, now four, was born. Caroline never stopped hoping to find her eldest son, but somehow, seeing Neil now was not as joyful an occasion as it should have been, especially since, ten years to the day after his disappearance, here he was in her bed, looking not a day older than when he was taken, and wearing the exact same fire truck pajamas he'd been wearing to bed ten years ago, his cheeks--which had never been chubby in the first place--so hollow she could make out that little dip in his jaw where his teeth joined the mandible.

"He said it was a game," Neil explained in a chill whisper. "Uncle Odie made me dig a hole at the farm, and then made me lay down. And then I forgot."

"Forgot what, baby?"

"Everything."

She looked closer, and knew with awful certainty what had happened to her eldest--or at least acknowledged the awful truth that she'd never before dared to think aloud, but had somehow always subconsciously known: Odom Detwiler was no friend.

Caroline woke up screaming, and would never forget the bullet hole dead center, below the scrubby brown fringe on her little Neil's forehead.

Inkwells Stories

Each of these stories was written as part of the Haven's writing group, the Inkwells. I've included the date and details of each story's prompt in the descriptions below. The titles that I have given my response stories are on the individual story pages.

The stories as they are linked here are not the original versions, but have been re-written and/or revised as per comments made by the other Inkwells members during the following weeks' meetings. These stories are posted with the most-recent story first.


April 1, 2010: Short Prompt - No less than 200 words, no more than 800 words, on family.

March 25, 2010: Same Plot, Different Authors
Everyone will individually write a story with the following elements:

  1. A female protagonist
  2. A group of friends
  3. A weather-related catastrophe
  4. A sacrifice of morals in order to survive (that they will regret later)
March 18, 2010: Co-Authored Works

March 11, 2010: Personal Challenge - Abstract and Vague

March 4, 2010:
February 25, 2010: Cliffhanger Conclusion

February 11, 2010: Cliffhanger

February 4, 2010:
Happy! Must include: a feast, a dance, and a toy.

January 28, 2010: Abiku.
From the wiki:
Abiku is a word in Yoruba mythology. The word is derived from Yoruba: (abiku) "predestined to death", which is from (abi) "that which possesses" and (iku) "death". Abiku refers to the spirits of children who die before reaching puberty; a child who dies before twelve years of age being called an Abiku, and the spirit, or spirits, who caused the death being also called Abiku.
Ben Okri's novel "The Famished Road" is based upon an abiku. Debo Kotun's novel "Abiku", a political satire of the Nigerian military oligarchy, is based upon an abiku. Gerald Brom's illustrated novel, The Plucker, depicts a child's toys fighting against an abiku.

The Tragedy of Landingtown

I usually like to have a title for my stories before I post them, no matter their length or which draft they are, but I just can't think of one at the moment. I'm up for suggestions though.

The colonists had been settled into their new lives on Fabricius for almost a decade before they learned just how incomplete the scouts’ exploration reports had been.

Of course, it wasn’t all their fault; it was almost a tradition in the Old Space Union by the time Fabricius was discovered, after all, that only the dregs--or the extremest of greenies--of the military ever pulled exploration duty. Those members of the scouting team actually qualified to be on it were probably either fresh-out-of-the-academy privates who lacked the experience needed to detect potential problems in a new world’s ecosystem from the disparate clues, or were too busy trying to avoid the more unsavory members of their party to be able to make a thorough investigation possible in their allotted time frame.

Whatever the reason had been for the sparseness of the reports, Mayor Nitika Halliwell doubted that knowing it would help her now.

As she hurried to the Admin Dormitory dome from Landingtown’s Administration Hall, the jaundiced sky caught her attention. Its color had darkened to almost orange in the hour she’d spent meeting with the town council, signaling the imminent arrival of yet another “sulfur storm.”

Nitika trudged across the courtyard, her heart heavy as the breeze strengthened, lifting the ends of her hair from under the back of her filter mask.

The door to the Admin Dorm made a small shushing nose from all of the sulfur which had drifted over the threshold and blown into the hinges as Nitika walked through it.

“Hiya, Mayor Halliwell,” said Mr. Turner from the table in the common room, where he and his friends were holding their weekly card game.

“Evening, gentlemen,” Nitika answered without her usual smile after removing her mask and hanging her coat on one of the communal hooks installed in the dorm’s entryway. Heaving a sigh, she told the group of friends, “Meeting before dinner, guys. You might want to wrap up a bit early, or you’ll miss it.”

“Sure thing, Nitika,” Mr. Douglass answered. “Looks like ol’ Jimmy’s about to clean us all out anyway.”

With a nod, Nitika headed through the kitchen and dining units to the Media Control room.

From this room, to which only a few of the colony’s leaders had access, entertainment and news broadcasts could be channeled to every screen in the colony. Three walls were crowded with screens and control panels, some lighted, some not. Instead of accessing one of the dormant control stations, Nitika turned to the right as she crossed the threshold, reaching for the public access microphone. She flipped a switch, and her voice echoed throughout Landingtown.

“Attention all colonists: there will be an emergency meeting this evening at 1830. All adults must attend. Repeat: there will be a mandatory, full-colony meeting at 1830. That is all.” Replacing the microphone, Nitika rubbed some grit out of her eyes and made her way through the blue-and-white-striped corridor to her living quarters; she needed to slip into something not coated in sulfur dust.

*****

Over five hundred colonists crowded into the dining hall that evening as Nitika looked on from the podium. Screens covering the other three walls showed colonists gathering in Landingtown’s ninety-nine other dormitory dorms’ dining halls as well. Nitika waited silently, nodding occasionally to people she recognized in her own dome as they found their seats.

Finally, everyone was seated in all locations. Nitika pressed a button on the podium’s control surface, causing the lights to flash and a long tone to sound in all one hundred dorms.

“Good evening, ladies and gentlemen,” she began when the din of curiosity had died down. She pressed another button on the podium, muting the microphone pickups from the other domes so that the quiet in Admin Dorm would help to amplify and clarify her voice for the other dorms’ speakers. “I thank you for coming, and wish I had some better news than that which I have to share with you tonight. Please hold all questions and comments until after I have finished explaining our current situation.”

Nitika paused for a moment, and then continued. “Our head meteorologist, Gary Jeffers, informs me that the wind storms which carry sulfur to us from the large deposits in the south are not expected to cease for another six standard months. In addition, our silo manager, Ms. Weldon, has informed the council that our barley stores will hold out only for another five of those months."

When the winds had picked up to gale force six months before, the colonists had thought nothing of it. Their habitat domes were built to withstand the harshest of conditions, and the prep team had anchored the domes’ supports in bedrock before any of the other colonists had been allowed onto the planet’s surface from the massive ships which had carried them from their myriad home worlds.

That is, they had thought nothing of the winds until any colonists caught even a minute in the wind caught nasty coughs, and the year’s barley crop started to die.

Had they known of Fabricius’s fifteen-year wind storm cycle from the exploration reports, the colony at Landingtown may have had a contingency plan. But alas, Nitika thought as she paused, meeting a few peoples' eyes, the reports were sorely lacking in any detail other than the facts of breathable air, edible plants, and soil compatible with Terran food crops.

That is why Nitika had called the emergency council meeting from which she'd returned less than an hour before. And though the facts were grim, the council's proposed solution was even grimmer.

Reluctantly, Nitika continued. “As you know, due to the heavy amount of sulfur dioxide in the air, our most recent crop has died before we could harvest it. This means that, even if we do manage to survive until the storms end, we will not have anymore food supplies available to last until the Space Union’s rescue ships arrive.”

Nitika closed her eyes until the rolling murmur of the incredulous crowd ebbed, then squared her shoulders and faced her fellow colonists again. A melancholy timbre colored her voice when next she spoke.

“Ladies and gentlemen, the council and I fear that, unless drastic measures are taken, our entire colony will perish with no survivors within five and a half months.”

This time, the reaction from just the five hundred colonists in the Admin Dorm was nearly deafening, and took almost ten minutes to die down.

When the cacophony waned, Nitika held up her hands. “People of Landingtown,” she said, “the council has proposed a solution which will help to save at least some of us long enough to receive aid, but this solution is a mixed blessing, at best. At worst, it is detestable. Therefore, we on the council cannot, in good conscience, implement this plan without your fully-informed consent.”

There was no good way to make her next statement, so Nitika elected for blunt honesty. “The council proposes the euthanization of a full half of the colony’s total population, with the exception of children under the age of sixteen and personnel whose work is absolutely vital to the survival of the colony.”

At this, there was another upheaval, but Nitika merely spoke louder to be heard over the noise.

“The decision, however, lies with you. I ask that all Dormitory Managers hold a vote in each dome, and comm the results to my office no later than Thursday at 1700.” At that, Mayor Halliwell of Landingtown, first colony on the planet Fabricius, took a deep breath, thanked her constituents, and asked for questions and comments.

A woman in the center front-row seat on one of the screens stood, and Nitika looked to that screen’s video pickup and un-muted its audio before calling, “Yes, Eta Dorm?”

“Ms. Mayor,” the brunette Eta Dorm Manager asked, “It’s all well and good to exclude children from this awful plan, but what will happen to those children if their parents are no longer there to care for them?”

There were sporadic head nods all around the room and on the screens as Nitika answered the question. “There will be sufficient time for parents to make arrangements with survivors for care of their children. Should the plan be carried through, the council has elected to leave the exact nature of those arrangements to either the individuals’ or the Dorm Groups’ discretions.

“But what about these so-called ‘essential personnel?’” one man shouted from the room in front of Nitika as she keyed off Eta Dorm’s audio once again. “Who’s to decide who makes the cut and who doesn’t? And for that matter, what’s to keep the list-makers from putting themselves on the list?”

“I assure you, Mr. Hogarty, that the council will be absolutely scrupulous in the selection of essential personnel. No one will be considered for the list, unless there is no one else in Landingtown with enough experience or training to do their job effectively. Furthermore,” she continued, “the list will be posted on the announcement screens of every dormitory dome, to ensure honesty in the selection process. I will have the final veto over any name on that list, and I will tell you now that my name will not be on it.”

Astonished silence greeted this announcement, just as an automatically timed bell tone announced the dinner hour.

“I’ll not keep you from your meals much longer, ladies and gentlemen. Dorm Managers, please organize a ballot among your people, and comm the results to me in two days. Thank you.”

Nitika shut off the view screens from the podium’s control board and stepped off of the stage, not hearing the debates and recriminations from her dorm mates over the muddle of her own thoughts.

*****

A week later, twenty-five thousand people--including Mayor Halliwell, half of the council, and half of each dorm’s average population--were injected with lethal amounts of Nembutal. The survivors held a large memorial ceremony for the brave men and women who had died to save the colony, and built a monument to their heroism in the center of Landingtown.

In the space just past perihelion of the Fabricius system, a Spyridon trading ship made its final, three-week approach to Fabricius, her cargo holds full of surplus foodstuffs to trade for Landingtown’s copious textile goods.

Diatribe for Dylan

Diatribe for Dylan
or
Be Born Already!

by Darcy and Lindsey

Your mother tells me
Your skull presses against her spine,
But she is ultimately resigned
To carry you until
We all learn
If you're stuck with Daddy's nose.

While I wonder if your voice will
Evoke gulls wheeling above hot beach sands,
Your mother drinks enough water
To sow a new sea.

While I wonder if you’ll echo the far off cry of
A lonely foghorn,
The weight of you, she says,
Expands the pallet of her pelvis
As though an over-ripe pomegranate
Has grown between her thighs.

I walk with her daily,
Both of us hoping
For an early end to her strain.

With parents who the twain
Are equally stubborn,
It's no wonder that you stay in the womb,
Or that you're already such a pain!

With each day
Closer to your birth,
In each and every way,
Your antics increase our growing mirth.

But no matter the trouble
Or toil to Dear Mother,
Complaints in the ears of
Doting Dad,
Or the grudging patience of your
Loving Auntie,
We await the joy of three o'clock feedings,
Spit-up on our shoulders,
And fetid diapers with baited breath.

Auntie prepares a lullaby
For a hopelessly spoiled nephew.
But before you can be indulged
And favored so,
Dear Dylan,
First you have to get here!